by Raven Garabo
In the post below, Raven Garabo, coeditor of Widener University’s in-house literary journal, analyzes Susan Palwick’s “The Goddess of Not Enough,” a flash fiction published in the August 2026 issue of Lightspeed. If you’re looking for ways to enhance characterization in your own fiction, Raven’s post is worth a look.
Characters often find themselves moving within a story, whether they’re making a cup of tea or taking a walk in the forest. However, there is a difference between a character moving and character action, which results a turning point in the story. As Janet Burroway explains in Writing Fiction, “Every story is a pattern of change…in which small and large changes are made through decision and discovery” (69). This is presented in the flash “The Goddess of Not Enough” by Susan Palwick. Here, the main character finds herself at odds with her fairy godmother. Both characters make several intentional decisions that end up changing the story. With character action, Palwick uses the decisions from both characters to influence the trajectory of the story and allow the main character to discover her inner strength.
One of the very first actions that affect the outcome of the story occurs at the beginning. The fairy godmother, who has been helping the main character, decides that she has had enough working with the main character because she accidentally stepped on the prince’s foot. Palwick states, “Back in your father’s barn after the ball, the godmother shakes her head and tells you there will be no more dances, no more gown or glass slippers.” When the fairy godmother shakes her head and dismisses the main character, this action causes the girl to spiral. It may be a small change, but this inciting incident helps push the plot of the story forward, making the main character contemplate other ways her life might unravel. The fairy godmother rejecting the main character motivates her to want to change herself; she does not want to rely on magic to make people feel better but to help them herself.
After the fairy godmother rejects the main character, the next action the main character makes is to leave her life behind, becoming the “anti-godmother.” Palwick notes, “Running away is easy. You steal one stepsister’s satchel and two of the other’s dresses and set out on the road.” Deciding to leave shows the new discovery that the main character has in believing in herself. She is not as helpless as the fairy godmother has impressed on her and is determined to become something new. In running away to help other people, the main character’s inner courage is emphasized. It means that she is willing to take her life into her own hands and create something new with it, changing the outlook of the story.
One of the most important actions of the story is when the main character grows confident in herself as the anti-godmother. After centuries of helping people find happiness without magic, the main character is drawn to the “stench of shame to a payday loan shop in a decaying city.” While there, she finds the original fairy godmother dying and engages in conversation with her, although the fairy godmother does not recognize her at first. The choice to actively seek out and stay after realizing who needs her help shows that the main character has grown much wiser and comfortable in her powers. She is not the same young girl who was unsure of herself that she once was. She wants to help anyone who needs her, no matter who it is. The action of lingering and talking leads to the understanding that she is stronger than what the fairy godmother might think about her.
“The Goddess of Not Enough” has both small and large points of action. The most important ones to note advance the plot of the story, showing how Palwick builds the inner strength of the main character. At first, the main character is insecure and uncertain of herself. She believes what the fairy godmother has told her. However, as the story progresses, she beings to realizes she is a lot more than the what the fairy godmother told her. This revelation helps characterize the main character by illustrating how resilient and compassionate she is towards others. With each new action, the story changes and the reader finally recognizes—along with the main character—the discovery that she can help these people who were, once, just like her.
If you’d like to read the story for yourself, click on the link below:
https://www.lightspeedmagazine.com/fiction/the-goddess-of-not-enough/





